"WHAT HAPPENS WHEN WE DIE"
I don't believe the traditional idea of heaven and hell. I think that after death our body decay or when someone cremate than it falls to ashes. Our soul continue an goes in an other body. That goes on and on till the end of the world. I can't believe that death is the end and we have only one change to make it good. I don't think that there is another world like a beyond .
But who can say that this is the truth? It is impossible to find out what happens after death, because nobody can rise from the death to tell us what will happen. I'm not scared to die because at any time, we all have to die and now I'm young and should enjoy my life. And in the next life, we can start an absolutely new life, with a new family, new people an friends and new experiences.
I don't believe the traditional idea of heaven and hell. I think that after death our body decay or when someone cremate than it falls to ashes. Our soul continue an goes in an other body. That goes on and on till the end of the world. I can't believe that death is the end and we have only one change to make it good. I don't think that there is another world like a beyond .
But who can say that this is the truth? It is impossible to find out what happens after death, because nobody can rise from the death to tell us what will happen. I'm not scared to die because at any time, we all have to die and now I'm young and should enjoy my life. And in the next life, we can start an absolutely new life, with a new family, new people an friends and new experiences.
1 comment:
"the body decays" (3rd person s)
"someone is cremated" (passive)
"it turns to ashes)
"the soul lives on"
"goes into another body"
change <--> chance (not the spelling and the meaning of the words!)
"death" - no article with death (unless you add .... of "the death of ..." to it)
"scared of dying"
- you present your ideas fluently and clearly, but make quite a few mistakes.
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